Tuesday, April 15, 2008

LONELINESS...

sitting in a crowded space
there is no one around me
traveling to a far off place
time runs as if to flee
hunger,sleep and glee
are now,not a part of me....

all the ballads i hear
seems to be related to me
to the remorse,i am near
now,i am paying the fee
standing all alone
far away from the word....'WE'....

i am left trespassed
robbed of everything with me
i feel empty and hollow
like a leafless tree
i sailed,i swam and i drowned
deep in that vast sea....

nothing i can do,no more i can gee
don't even ask for,anything from he
this is what i want
for this is what i plea
get my happiness back to me
coz' darkness and fear,daggers and spear
this is what i feel...
this is what i see...

THIS IS WHAT IS ME.....

9 comments:

Sartaj Singh Gill said...

As always boy you blow me away with the awesome comparisons that you have put in here.
Keep the flame ablaze.

Unknown said...

Hey dude.... I never knew you could write like that...!!!!! Ah well.... words are foes of reality and you've done a great job.... slippery words n vicious thoughts....!!!!
Now that's another aspect of your persona......
You compelled me to say that.....
You've just manipulated the words and stringed them with your thoughts or i should say imagination....!!!!!
keep up your livin thoughts and keep up the blooging!!!!!!!
you rock anyways!!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

neat work even!!

Anonymous said...

very good mate.i would reiterate wat mr gill said "keep the flame ablaze" ....but if ur sis reads this ..
:0

Even said...

oye j....
koi ni..koi ni

Unknown said...

whoops..didnt know at all abt this aspect of urs even...

Even said...

thnx preeti.....encouragements r all i need...

Anonymous said...

amazing expressions...really liked.. keep writing Man!
its simply superb..

Unknown said...

WAH BAI WAH